Manuscript Evaluation

I’ll read your manuscript and provide big-picture feedback on your story’s plot, structure, pacing, and character arcs in an editorial letter. I will not make any changes, but I will make in-line comments.

(Transparency: Realistically, I might sneak in a reader reaction a time or two.)

Here is what you’ll get with this service:

• Margin notes directly on your manuscript.

• A detailed editorial letter, typically 10-20 pages, specific to your story.

• An honest assessment of what's working, what isn't, and why.

• A customized, revision framework built around your specific story needs, so you know what to tackle first and why.

• A 60-minute video session where you bring your questions, go deeper, and leave with a clear plan for moving forward.